essay polishing 2000 words topic young african people in melbourne and discriminatory policing –

Here is the essay instruction and my essay, I want to polish this essay to avoid plagiarism and this essay will be marked on the following criteria:

Structure and organisation:

  • Is the introduction clear and relevant?
  • Is the argument logical and coherent?
  • Is the conclusion clear and relevant?


  • Is there appropriate use of conceptualisation?
  • Is the argument substantiated by evidence?
  • Is the discussion innovative?


  • Is there a proper bibliography?
  • Is the written expression adequate?
  • Is the word limit adhered to?
  • Is the referencing appropriate?